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Post by Moss » Tue, 3. Dec 02, 15:27

SteveMill wrote:
Moss wrote:... Artur intended! nice to have him back too, his little control problems added nicely to the reality of the scene.

Great stuff, looking forward to more as ever, cheers.
Name that parody :wink:
Hehe, don't think I can, tho it did put me in mind of some problems Crighton from Red Dwarf had at one time, and C3P0 from one of the starwars films after being put back together to hastily :)
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Post by SteveMill » Tue, 3. Dec 02, 15:35

Moss wrote:
SteveMill wrote:
Moss wrote:... Artur intended! nice to have him back too, his little control problems added nicely to the reality of the scene.

Great stuff, looking forward to more as ever, cheers.
Name that parody :wink:
Hehe, don't think I can, tho it did put me in mind of some problems Crighton from Red Dwarf had at one time, and C3P0 from one of the starwars films after being put back together to hastily :)
no - decades out! :(
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Post by Mercenary » Tue, 3. Dec 02, 16:42

If I've got the name right I'm thinking Dr Strangelove (Peter Sellers) :wink:

:lol:
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Post by SteveMill » Tue, 3. Dec 02, 17:06

Mercenary wrote:If I've got the name right I'm thinking Dr Strangelove (Peter Sellers) :wink:

:lol:
Give that man a prize somebody. :idea:
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Post by KiwiNZ » Tue, 3. Dec 02, 22:03

Excellent finish to the chapter, Steve!!

Can imagine the odd feeling of Max flying an un-armed craft to a pirate station :-)

Found one thing :wink:

Max to Jackson: 'Don't suppose you cauht a name' You put this question in twice, should be the second one something like 'Sure you don't have a name?'

Looking forward to more!!
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Post by SteveMill » Tue, 3. Dec 02, 23:14

KiwiNZ wrote:Excellent finish to the chapter, Steve!!

Can imagine the odd feeling of Max flying an un-armed craft to a pirate station :-)

Found one thing :wink:

Max to Jackson: 'Don't suppose you cauht a name' You put this question in twice, should be the second one something like 'Sure you don't have a name?'

Looking forward to more!!
That is Jack repeating Max's question. not sure when the next chapter will appear, hopefully over the weekend.
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Post by SteveMill » Thu, 5. Dec 02, 07:12

Self bump
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KiwiNZ
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Post by KiwiNZ » Thu, 5. Dec 02, 11:41

SteveMill wrote:Self bump
in front of a mirror? :lol:

bumpy-de-bump
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Post by SteveMill » Thu, 5. Dec 02, 13:31

Al wrote:Just to say that I've not forgotten about re-reading it but work is a bit hectic at the moment due to a rush order for a big company. Gotta get this right and with my current concentration of a goldfish thats a tall order :lol:

Al
NP, appreciate you're ill. Next chapter delayed due to having to work long and hard.
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